Kimbur,
Much better now.
I have learned from looking at photos of my own set ups that often wrinkles/folds look worse on photos than in reality.
For soft grounds you are better off using long stakes, the 8/9" types .
Make sure that you push them in at 45 degree (or so) from perpendicular away from the fly.
Like this :
45 degree stake.jpg
but have the stake (if you can) all the way into the ground.
You can also pull down the bottom of the pole sleeve via the ladder locks .
Pull down for wind /heavy rain, push up for ventilation.
The end on the right looks to be a bit to straight up, the apex of that triangle should tilt outward to form with the rope tie-outs something that looks like a 3 sided pyramid
You can see it in my Moment , having the X pole forming one of the sides :
Moment-2.jpg
anyway, they are minor points, so well done you are getting there.